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Miss Parfait, Chicago Age and Occupation: 26, Teacher Fiance's Age and Occupation: 24, Senior Online Consultant Engagement Date: February 14, 2009 Wedding Date: April 2010 Venue: Signature Events About Me: I have a soft spot for all things sweet and romantic. Desserts, love songs, sappy movies? Yes, yes, and ohh yes. My fiance and I enjoy singing to our dogs, creating crazy ice cream sundaes, and generally being lovey dovey cuddle bunnies. We also do socially acceptable things like dancing, throwing Frisbees, playing high stakes board games, and taking unreasonably fun road-trips. We're planning a Korean/Serbian wedding with plenty of playful, personal touches!
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Save the Date Rhymes

November 30th, 2009 @ 5:04 pm by Miss Parfait

It’s five months out, and Mr. Parfait was ready to send our Save the Dates weeks ago. I caused a series of delays (just call me Miss Indecisive), including a last-minute plan to enclose a sweet two-line poem. It would add a personal touch and let people know that the enclosed item is a magnet. We came up with a few of our own, searched Weddingbee for ideas, and asked our rhyming-inclined friends for suggestions. Out of ideas, Mr. Parfait suggested we post the question on another online community.

At first, I asked him not to—I thought most of the comments would be useless, crass, and generally anti-wedding. (It ain’t no Weddingbee!) And many of them were. But we did it for fun, braced ourselves for the worst, and, 308 replies later, actually found a few gems! Here are the ones that made us smile:

We’re having a wedding, as you might have guessed/And this magnet means we want YOU as a guest!

When we met, we knew it was fate/Here is a magnet to save the date.

A magnet for you to let you know/Our wedding’s approaching, we hope you go!

When you go to the fridge to feed your face/Remember our wedding’s time and place.

Put this magnet in your kitchen/So you’ll remember when we’re hitchin’.

He popped the question; she said, “Yes!”/Now he’s renting a tux and she’s buying a dress.

Fish, chicken or beef tonight/We’re getting married, you’re coming, right?

You might remember this date in your head/To be safe, here’s a magnet with the date we will wed.

Good company, good food and good wine/Please be there when I make her mine.

Like this magnet on metal, we’re joining together/So make sure you’re there when we make it forever.

A small reminder for you to keep/Of the day your friends took the leap.

Instead of eating that leftover meatloaf/Come to our wedding in April, you sweet oaf.

We’re getting married a little later/Keep this on your refrigerator.

Before you eat too much to easily digest/Remember this date to fit in your dress.

____ and ____ will soon exchange vows/Then culminate the night with bow-chicka-bow-wows.

Our wedding is what this magnet’s about/So if you can come, just give us a shout!

Save the date, we hope you come./There will be cake, OM NOM NOM NOM!

We’re still deciding on which one to use. If it were your magnet, which one would you choose?

Or if you can do better, please give us a hand. A rhyme from the hive would be just as grand!

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32 Responses to “Save the Date Rhymes”

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Mitten

These are hilarious! We had a simple rhyme on the cardstock, with the magnet stuck in the middle with photocorners:
“The church is booked, the date is set/
Please keep this magnet so you don’t forget!”

 
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emariel

the meatloaf / “sweet oaf” thing is the funniest thing i have ever read.

i’m STILL laughing at my desk.

 
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Miss Pretzel
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Miss Pretzel (message)  768 posts, Busy bee

Put this magnet in your kitchen/So you’ll remember when we’re hitchin’

Love it!

 
4.
tea
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tea (message)  4,381 posts, Honey bee

either this: Good company, good food and good wine/Please be there when I make her mine.

or: Save the date, we hope you come./There will be cake, OM NOM NOM NOM!

 
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Miss Spaniel (message)  4,443 posts, Honey bee

The meatloaf/sweet oaf one is cracking me up. ;)

I think the kitchen/hitchin’ one is my favorite to let people know it’s a magnet. Some of these are pretty good!

 
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Miss Frozen Yogurt (message)  1,547 posts, Bumble bee

ha!! I LOVE these!! Too bad I already sent my save the dates!

 
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alundberg
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alundberg (message)  404 posts, Helper bee

Ohmygosh! Can I PLEASE steal these for my STD magnets?

 
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Mrs. Mouse (message)  5,169 posts, Bee Keeper

I don’t know why, but I like this one. It makes me laugh.

We’re getting married a little later/Keep this on your refrigerator.

 
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lemondrop
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lemondrop (message)  620 posts, Busy bee

I love anything that ends in NOM!

 
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peanut

i like this one:
Like this magnet on metal, we’re joining together/So make sure you’re there when we make it forever.

 
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Miss Nachos (message)  1,195 posts, Bumble bee

I’m with Mouse, that one is too funny - simple but silly :)

 
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KMSull
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KMSull (message)  6,140 posts, Bee Keeper

OMG these are AMAZING! I’d love to include a couplet in our STD’s but my seems to be against ANYTHING cute! Such a killjoy.

 
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amanda.lynn
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amanda.lynn (message)  4,068 posts, Honey bee

I like this one:
“He popped the question; she said, “Yes!”/Now he’s renting a tux and she’s buying a dress.”
and this one
“We’re getting married a little later/Keep this on your refrigerator”

 
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cwrenity

omg — talk about deja vu! I saw these on reddit just last week!

 
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fromcharleston (message)  172 posts, Blushing bee

He popped the question; she said, “Yes!”/Now he’s renting a tux and she’s buying a dress.

 
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Blueshoes2
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Blueshoes2 (message)  1,140 posts, Bumble bee

Kitchen/hitchin is my favorite! All of these are so cute and creative! Too bad mine are basic and non-rhyming. Boo.

 
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Charm bracelet
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Charm bracelet (message)  1,475 posts, Bumble bee

I agree with fromcharleston, he’s renting a tux and your buying a dress.
It’s kinda close to what we have on ours. We just put, ____ asked and _____ said yes. Please save the date.
But I like yours a lot more! Darn it!

 
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mcnetn3
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mcnetn3 (message)  157 posts, Blushing bee

When you go to the fridge to feed your face/Remember our wedding’s time and place– this one is a definite winner for me!

 
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Miss Cola (message)  1,493 posts, Bumble bee

These are adorable! Looking forward to seeing which you pick!

 
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Mrs. Moonbeam (message)  1,470 posts, Bumble bee

Am I the only one that loves the bow chicka bow wow? Maybe make a few different ones and send them to those they fit best.

 
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ebs1123
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ebs1123 (message)  189 posts, Blushing bee

Put this magnet in your kitchen/So you’ll remember when we’re hitchin’.
OR
Like this magnet on metal, we’re joining together/So make sure you’re there when we make it forever.

 
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RecessionistaBride
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RecessionistaBride (message)  4,232 posts, Honey bee

ahahaha this is so awesome! I like the simplicity of this one: “When we met, we knew it was fate/Here is a magnet to save the date!”

This one made me laugh my head off:
“When you go to the fridge to feed your face/Remember our wedding’s time and place.”

 
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Mrs. Dee to Bee
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Mrs. Dee to Bee (message)  817 posts, Busy bee

God is good, God is great/ Don’t forget to Save the Date!

That’s the one we used. (:

 
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Miss Poodle
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Miss Poodle (message)  3,279 posts, Sugar bee

this is sooo COOL!!

 
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Bennie
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Bennie (message)  64 posts, Worker bee

miss parfait.. you must love narwhals as well! my mind is blown, haha!

 
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Miss Parfait (message)  1,074 posts, Bumble bee

Heehee, I was a big fan of the “feed your face” one, too.

@alundberg: Yes, that’s what they’re here for! Use ‘em up~

@Bennie: Lol, Mr. Parfait does. : )

 
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iyaness

the OM NOM NOM NOM!

 
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Ms. Min Pin
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Ms. Min Pin (message)  254 posts, Helper bee

NOM NOm NOM!

 
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Brightasthesun (message)  52 posts, Worker bee

I love: “He popped the question; she said, “Yes!”/Now he’s renting a tux and she’s buying a dress.” but I would probably combine it with another, since you wanted to let your guests know it was a magnet.

What about:
“He popped the question; she said, ‘Yes!’/Now he’s renting a tux and she’s buying a dress./ When we met, we knew it was fate/Here is a magnet to save the date!”

or

“He popped the question; she said, ‘Yes!’/Now he’s renting a tux and she’s buying a dress./Save the date, we hope you come./There will be cake, OM NOM NOM NOM!”

(the last one makes me giggle everytime!!)

 
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Miss Parfait (message)  1,074 posts, Bumble bee

Omgosh, so many votes for the NOMs! I’m excited to share what we chose. : )

 
31.
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Hope It’s Not Too Late! « Miss Parfait

[...] you know, we wanted to include a short poem to tell people, “Hey, I’m a magnet.  Don’t throw me away!”  Here’s [...]

 
32.
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Hope It’s Not Too Late! | Weddingbee

[...] you know, we wanted to include a short poem to tell people, “Hey, I’m a magnet. Don’t throw me away!” Here’s what they’ll see when [...]

 


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Miss Parfait Miss Parfait, Chicago Age and Occupation: 26, Teacher Fiance's Age and Occupation: 24, Senior Online Consultant Engagement Date: February 14, 2009 Wedding Date: April 2010 Venue: Signature Events About Me: I have a soft spot for all things sweet and romantic. Desserts, love songs, sappy movies? Yes, yes, and ohh yes. My fiance and I enjoy singing to our dogs, creating crazy ice cream sundaes, and generally being lovey dovey cuddle bunnies. We also do socially acceptable things like dancing, throwing Frisbees, playing high stakes board games, and taking unreasonably fun road-trips. We're planning a Korean/Serbian wedding with plenty of playful, personal touches!
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